Coursework : Changes made to the rough cut

What changes did you make to the rough cut?

After listening to some of the audience feedback on the rough cut, we added extra clips as we did not feel as though the re was not enough clips, This was because the opening did not reach the full duration og 2 minutes. We also played around with th editing as the editing seemed boring and simple, we wanted something a bit different that stood out from the rest of horror and suspense. We also added titles as we did not meet the assessment criteria, it also confuses the audience without titles because they do not know what is happening it is just a mash up of clips that do not make any sense, the titles mae everything easier to understand and reveal the title of the film.